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#1 data

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Posted 06 October 2012 - 11:01 PM

Here is 77008: male human fighter
fighter1.jpg figher3.jpg
fighter2.jpg fighter4.jpg
and 77009: Werewolf
wolf1.jpg wolf2.jpg wolf3.jpg

any tips or constructive comments welcome
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#2 Adrift

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Posted 07 October 2012 - 12:08 AM

HI and welcome!

First off, your work looks very clean and paint seems to be where it needs to be for the most part, which is a great start.

With regards to the human warrior there's a portion of the sword that looks like it was damaged by an exacto knife (or other sharp instrument) and I'd recommend fixing that if possible. I also note a shade difference between the upper and lower tabard which seems a bit confusing.

With regards to the werewolf, it looks like you might have dry brushed a little too thickly on the fur, and thus eliminated some of the subtlety. It looks like you also tried adding some blood to the claws; I'd recommend darkening it a bit to be more realistic.

In all, it's great to have you out and you're off to a great start!!




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