I got my Book today! Woot. Comparing it to the CAV: SO preview PDF I see that the book went through some MAJOR rethinking. //Graphic design is much better by the way. // So now, what about a PDF version? Thoughts? Plans? Will come free for KS backers?
Humble suggestion... The page background makes my eyes sad. It's hard to read the rules with that textured background. Everything around it is fine, like the rusty diamond-plate border. The text area, though, looks like someone took a hack "brushed metal" Photoshop tutorial on the web a little too seriously. Just use plain white or a 10% gray or bluefish gray, maybe dirty the edges and around the corner bolts a bit. Please and thank you. Full disclosure: trained graphic designer