sycophant Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Commonplace casualty. To life's foibles prone. Curve, scent, softness anew. Agonies plain yet unknown. Pandora familiar. Sister, mother, crone. Whisper softly, slowly sigh. Whimper, cry, moan. Cloying musk of unknowing. Solace savage in tone. Grief is undone. Succor's trespass condoned. Yet we remain fettered. Skin to skin and alone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan6 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 I don't pretend to know more about poetry than I do, I slept through most of it in Lit. 101, but I do know what I like and I like this. Very descriptive, very "visual". Your words evoked images and not a lot of poetry does that for me. Please keep writing, I'm enjoying it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spike Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 That was a very good poem.. it flows nicely, and upon checking my online dictionary and adding a few new words to my sad li'l vocabulary, it was a very evocative poem as well. I like the sparse yet direct wording of it. It has a style I like alot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KAMUT Posted October 8, 2004 Share Posted October 8, 2004 Yeah keep writing The most in poetry I know is whatever I picked up, rapping and watching spoken word guys in a cipher. We used to do those kind of ciphers back in the day, and they were always cool; got people thinking. I'm a fan, keep it coming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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