Kuro Cleanbrush Posted February 7, 2015 Author Share Posted February 7, 2015 The green sword is lovely. I don't mean to pick too much because its darn good but i feel it draws the eye too much. My eye bounces back and forth from his face to the sword and back to his face. I don't rest anywhere for long. for me I would want either or to provide a focus or resting place and not both. Its a pretty minor pick but i had to dig deep to find something :p Quite true, though, and appreciated! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonkeySloth Posted February 7, 2015 Share Posted February 7, 2015 Looks great. My suggestion, to help deal with the sword focus, would be to paint the hex like piece right under the face as a cloak clasp and put some green in it. Bam, problem solved. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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