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Myrianna of Aelfheim


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She is stunning and congratulations on your 2nd place finish! There are a couple of areas that need some more highlighting and some of your transitions are a bit harsh on the cloak. A glaze would have knocked the highlights down a bit and helped ease the transition and then you can go in an re-establish your highlights with the same highlight color but keep it tighter and smaller.

 

The brown leather needs to come up a bit higher as well and its there that you really need more contrast. Much, much deeper shadows and one more highlight. Also there is a soft brown at the top which just appears to be brown with no shadows or highlights.

 

Overall I think you just need to make the transitions in the blends a little smoother and bring more depth with darker shadows.

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