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I love your pink, it fits here so well and compliments the blue perfect. Here face turned out very pretty as well. I agree with your on her hair and her sword looks a bit unfinished as well compared to the rest, but I totally understand about losing interest. I am guilty of that too and wish I wouldn't.

 

Overall she looks great and you succeeded in making me want to dig mine out soon to work on. 

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Losing interest..such an ED nurse thing...bet you don't even know the BUN or creatinine because of lack of interest.

 

Nice work Jessi.

Haha! They're breathing, aren't they? You're welcome. 😈

Thanks y'all. Marsya, I'm sure yours will be excellent. They're such fun, delicate minis.

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I think you did a great job on her... I really do love the eyes as you obviuosly did NOT lose ineterest when doing those.  The hair could use a bit more definition but the amount of work you put in every where else makes up for that.  (PS you have a hair hanging off her left elbow  :rock: )

 

Overall an easy 8+ out of ten!

 

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I think you did a great job on her... I really do love the eyes as you obviuosly did NOT lose ineterest when doing those.  The hair could use a bit more definition but the amount of work you put in every where else makes up for that.  (PS you have a hair hanging off her left elbow  :rock: )

 

Overall an easy 8+ out of ten!

 

^_^

 

haha!!! she needs a tweeze!!!

Thanks so much!  :bday:

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Another example of how good sculpts bring out the best in us. Really great job, excellent color choices and great details.

 

Only feedback I'd give is of a general nature. Just continue what you're doing, work on increasing contrast, shadow/light placement, differentiating materials. Time to dig into the tough (but fun!) stuff.

 

Hmm, I do have a specific bit of feedback. I think the weakest part is probably the sword, for the reasons I gave above. Needs some more contrast, highlights, and it's not reading as a metal sword. Flat to the horizon swords are a bit tougher to make nice than angled ones imo, but if you apply some NMM shading and highlights to your metallics like so: http://cashwiley.com/2014/12/13/rollo-the-barbarian/(now this was really trying to push it, the lower blade face is almost entirely black but you get the idea!)

 

edited to add emphasis to the positive since this could be read as too much criticism of a very nicely painted mini :p

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