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DSM7425 Male Dwarven Fighter w/Great Axe

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Thanks Gang !

I was originally planning on doing a viking ship prow, but after serious consideration,

and four pages of sketches I decided it would detract from the mini, not add to it.

So I decided to go with the snow covered rune stone with a red dragon carved on it,

 

Was challenging to do.

Jay

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Wonderful job, the base looks great!  The cloak is very nice as well.  Not sure if it's the photo, but I feel after looking at the contrast in the cloak and seeing the progress you've made, a little more contrast in the skin would be an excellent next step.

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Thanks for the input on the skin Silvervane !

contrast..that thing that keeps on coming back and haunting us.

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Thanks Melvin;

Didn't see you sneak in your comment there..LOL.

Trying to upscale the basing.

As Ub3R said, a good base isn't easy !

I did three pages of drawings before I decided on this one!

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My only critique is to take your time a bit more I see unpainted green stuff on the side and grey paint on the black edges.

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My only critique is to take your time a bit more I see unpainted green stuff on the side and grey paint on the black edges.

I'll take care of those mistakes :)

Sometimes one focus is on doing everything right, you overlook the obvious.

I was very intense when it came to doing the base, I never even saw the two flaws you mention.

Glad they are simple to recover from !

:)

Thanks for the input !

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A good way to see those is that when you are "finished" put it away for a day or two and then come back to it with new/fresh eyes so that those are more observable. ::):

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Looks great, and I really liked your work on the base.  Only slight critique would be to dull down the metal a bit.  Not that it looks bad, more that it doesn't quite seem right for a rough, tough viking fellow.

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I love it when a miniature tells a story just by looking at it.

Pezler the Polychromatic;

Thank YOU so much for that comment !

I'm still trying to figure out how exactly to do that,

With the wonderful folks on this forum, you will get the information on how to

make that a reality !

Thanks again, you made my day

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