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I want to create a little street scene.

 

Bikers vs Pimp

 

So here is my mock up.

 

I'm not sure yet on the cat on the left, I want the one on the dumpster to view the scene.

 

Maybe the position of peaches and the motorcycle could be altered.

 

So any comments and suggestions, give them to me, so I can do what I want in the end anyway.. :;):

 

In honour of Lemmy's death I will include several Motörhead / Lemmy references in the piece.

 

Does this card wall make a believable wall?

 

I want it to be an alley.

 

 

 

 

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I like it so far!

I think that the card looks very good as a wall.

 

I like the idea of the cat on the dumpster; I'm not so sure about the other one, though.

 

I'll be looking forward to seeing how this develops.

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Wall needs some graffiti. Nice scene thou.

 

There is anther biker that might fit this scene as well

 

50272: Stubbs, Biker Thug ($5.99)

 

He is facing the wrong way thou.

 

Also call the scene "Time to play the Game?" ::):

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Wall needs some graffiti. Nice scene thou.

 

There is anther biker that might fit this scene as well

 

50272: Stubbs, Biker Thug ($5.99)

 

He is facing the wrong way thou.

 

Also call the scene "Time to play the Game?" ::):

 

 

Thx, I will add both graffiti and posters to the wall and dumpster,

 

I like the suggestion, I'm not sure yet, I have some other names in mind too,

But this is a great idea.

 

I've tought about stubbs and I have some more ladies...

 

But I guess this is enough minis, or it will get too crowded.

The cat on the dumpster stays, he is the spectator,

 

I'm indeed not sure about the other one yet.

Maybe he's too much ( Overkill!!!)

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Looks good so far. Try moving the hissing cat to the side of the dumpster like it's been startled and is looking around the corner. It that makes sense. I'd try moving the pimp or one of the bikers a bit more towards the middle.

 

I love this idea for a diorama, it's going to be pretty epic.

ETA- the brick wall is awesomesauce.

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I was thinking on this some more; your alley is awfully clean. You might want to trash it up a little bit.

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loose the black cat on the ground.   

 

The one on the dumpster is perfect.. he is showing the typical cat indifference to whats going on below him.

 

You also might  consider just the one mini with the shotgun and the bike on the left and move it and the dumpster a little more to the left of the base.  This would have him confronting the pimp with his two girls backing him up (or egging the pimp on).  I think the dumpster off center would be a bit more dynamic.

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Also,the pimp has the biker at a severe disadvantage, due to the fact that he is pointing his weapon and the biker has his at a bad angle with only one hand on it. ..

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Looks good so far. Try moving the hissing cat to the side of the dumpster like it's been startled and is looking around the corner. It that makes sense. I'd try moving the pimp or one of the bikers a bit more towards the middle.

 

I love this idea for a diorama, it's going to be pretty epic.

ETA- the brick wall is awesomesauce.

 

 

I was thinking on this some more; your alley is awfully clean. You might want to trash it up a little bit.

 

 

loose the black cat on the ground.   

 

The one on the dumpster is perfect.. he is showing the typical cat indifference to whats going on below him.

 

You also might  consider just the one mini with the shotgun and the bike on the left and move it and the dumpster a little more to the left of the base.  This would have him confronting the pimp with his two girls backing him up (or egging the pimp on).  I think the dumpster off center would be a bit more dynamic.

 

 

If you keep the second cat, maybe move it to the side of the dumpster near the wall. It looks odd standing in the open.

 

 

Thx all.

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It is just the mock up now.

 

The Alley will be made with putty/clay and will have stuff like some oil/rain puddles, maybe a newspaper or tin can. etc.

there will be graffiti and posters on the wall and the dumpster.

 

I really want to keep Peaches, I feel like the biker and the Pimp are arguing about who's girl(s) are allowed to walk this part of the street.

 

The Idea of moving the dumpster appeals to me.

I might loose the standing cat.

 

So, I listen to you all, and sometimes not.. but I get great input from you all. ::D:

Will incorporate some maybe even most of it.

 

About the title, Street Violence is the WIP title.

 

When finished it will get a real name.

 

It will be Motörhead related.

 

Haldir 's suggestion "Time to play the Game?" is a good one.

 

I also have others in mind. It is quite the list, Motörhead has a lot of songtitles that could apply to the scene.

So my favorites until now are in RED.

 

Any thoughts?

 

"Dirty Love"

 

"Love for Sale"

 

"Bite the Bullet"

 

"Tear Ya Down"

 

" Sharpshooter"

 

"Fire Fire"

 

"Sex and Outrage"

 

"Go To Hell"

 

"Die You Bastard!"

 

"All For You"

 

" Angel City"

 

" Make My Day"

 

" Shut You Down"

 

"You Better Run "

 

"Sex and Death"

 

"Love can't buy you money"

 

"Murder Show"

 

"Snake Bite Love"

 

"Shut your Mouth!"

 

"Whorehouse Blues"

 

"Killers"

 

" Smiling like a killer"

 

"Trigger"

 

"Under the Gun "'

 

"One Short Life"

 

" Bye Bye B%$#ch Bye Bye"

 

"I Know How to Die"

 

"Outlaw"

 

"End of Time"

 

"Silence When You Speak to Me "

 

"Shoot Out All Of Your Lights"

 

"Victory or Die"

 

"Teach Them How To Bleed"

 

" Tell Me Who To Kill"

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Also,the pimp has the biker at a severe disadvantage, due to the fact that he is pointing his weapon and the biker has his at a bad angle with only one hand on it. ..

 

 

 Nobody said life is fair :ph34r:

 

My story so far, is they got into a fight about which "boss" gets his girl(s) to walk this part of the street.

 

The Biker carries the shotgun but is surprised by the quick draw of the Pimp.

So now what?

 

Will Peaches pull out a gun?

Will the Street Ladies stop their Pimp?

Will the cat call the police?

Will the Biker back off?

Or will one of them die?

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And you forgot a Motorhead Title;;;

 

Love me like a Reptile!

 

LOL,

 

No I didn't it just didn't make the list.

 

I'm leaning to Angel City, might be a great title.

 

But there are so many..

Also I will include posters, graffiti, small symbols, names etc, in appropiate places.

 

I hope I can pull it off.

 

When done, I will ask you guys if you can spot all the Motörhead related things in the piece.

 

EDIT: Just thought of another title "You'd Better Step Down"

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Suggestions:

 

Motorhead or Lemmy poster on the wall somewhere (reduce a pic of him & the band to fit the scene)

 

Jack Daniels bottle on the ground somewhere.

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